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• Internet:
• Advertisement?
• Private income-tax?
1. Brainstorming的方法
(1)“科目归类法” 按固定角度,特征或条件思考相关内容细节。
①. “找一个英国人?”è Beckham,Tony Blair;
②. “找一个传统建筑典型?”è Chinese,Russiaè the Forbidden city, the Kremlin;
③. “找一个伟人但不一定不富裕” è Martin Luther King, Mother Teresa
(2) “细节总结法
④. 广告advertisement
脑海中浮现:具体事物与之联系 “KFC hamburgers” è tasty chickenègo to try oneè attractive, sale-profits, providing information è economic benefits, informative, artistic creation,
2. 多观点,多角度的思考问题
中心句的总公式:
In what aspect/principal/angle, what kind of effect does the subject exert on the specific object?
主语(施动者)给宾语(受动者)在哪个角度产生什么效果?
写作格式:建议/判断+理由
…………………. because………………..
构建中心句原因内容的步骤:
1. who/whom will be involved in ……….?Advertisement?
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答案: ___________________________________________________
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如何找到who/whom?
• Groups群体分类法:
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• Governmentsèofficials, countries, authorities…….
• Publicècitizens, residence,
• Individualè sex, age, poor/rich, minority/people, smart/slow,
表达建议,赞成,选择……
• Suggest= advise, propose, recommend, advocate;
Be encourage. Promoted(发扬)
• Discourage
• Support, agree,
• Prefer=choose, would like, favor
• Disagree= despite, object, oppose to
• Abandon, discard, be restricted, supervised,
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• I support AAA .
• AAA should be supported.
• It is supported for sb. to do …….
• Doing AAA should be supported/discouraged
• I prefer AAA to BBB …..
• I would rather choose AAA than BBB
中心句的理由句
• AAA/It/this practice/ this policy/ this choice /doing (applying, implementing, executing, conducting, committing (crime, suicide) ) AAA.
• + produces/offers/brings/creates
• / involves/incurs/poses
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• + for…./to…..
• + EFFECT/IMPACT
课堂练习1:将下列中心句的素材改写成标准的中心句句型:
Are cars doing more harm than good?
Ø 例题:
1. Cars are evils resulting from modernization, for they make people suffer rather than enjoy life.
è Cars should be discouraged because they are evils resulting from modernization which make people suffer rather than enjoy life.
2. Motor cars enable people to become more mobile.
è We should promote the usage of cars for the reason that Motor cars enable people to become more mobile.
Arguments FOR
Traffic accidents caused by cars not only bring death and injury, but also make people suffer mentally and psychologically.
Every year car owners have to pay vast sums to the exchequer: road tax, purchase tax, oil tax, etc. This is a big drain on their resources.
The roads are so often jammed with cars that ambulances and fire engines find it difficult to fulfill their duties. (提示:Cars should be done away with because……
Cars often produce air pollution and fill the cities with unbearable noise.
Cars are the cause of traffic accidents. All over the world thousands upon thousands of people are killed or injured every year.
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Counter-arguments Against
Possessing a car gives one a much greater degree of mobility, enabling him to move around freely.
The owner of a car is not forced to rely on public transport and is, therefore, not compelled to work locally.
Buses are often crowded and slow, especially during rush-hour. If there are more cars, people can get around more easily.
With the popularization of cars, the suburbs will become more developed, and the downtown area will be less crowded.
思维公式:目标对象 Sè被作用对象 Oè产生的效果
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思路一:S和O都是非生命的抽象对象(culture,artistic project,national pride);O产生非常positive 或negative的后果,主要体现在动词上
基本句型一: S+V+O (或者被动 O+ be+ V-ed+ S)
带有褒义的动词组合有:
l produces/offers/brings/creates+ 优点
l involves/incurs/poses+ 坏处
①. Arts illustrate a country’s civilization.
②. Government money inevitably produces mediocre or even hockey art.
③. Beautiful paintings, fair-sounding operas and other works of art enhance the quality of life.
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④. The image of a country as a modern, civilized and dynamic society can be enhanced by booming cultural development
思路二:O=生物,尤其是人类;O= 个体(individual),公民(citizens),公众(public),居民(local residence/dwellers),消费者(consumers)
基本句型二: S+V+O (或者被动 O+ be+ V-ed+ S)
(1) S正面作用于/或负面作用于个人,主要体现在特殊动词上
S+V.+sb. 或者 sb+V.+S 或者被动 S+be+ V-ed+sb.
⑤. Artistic interests are just shared by a small proportion of people.
(2) S正面作用于/或负面作用于个人,并同时引发(直接逻辑顺承)被作用人O作出反应
S+V+sb.+to do
⑥. Artistic education offers young generation opportunities to develop their cognitive skills.
⑦. Subsidies for musicians, artists, actors and drama companies will shift their focus on creating arts to pleasing that provides such subsidies.
范例:
①. Advertisements should be discouraged because too much commercials pose the threat/risks of over-consumption on consumers.
②. Advertisements should be opposed to because some of them contain misleading and damaging information which is inappropriate for children to watch.
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③. English spreading is bad è culturally disadvantageous/damaging/
English spreading should be restricted because teenagers will be lead to neglect their native language.
④. English spreading is financially beneficial
Spreading English should be advocated because this practice brings more profits to companies.
⑤. English spreading is culturally favorable
English should be promoted all over the world because it enables people from different cultures to communicate with each other easily.
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重点词汇补充:
形容“正确和错误,优点和缺点'的词群
POSITIVE:
Beneficial advantageous favorable rewarding appropriate desirable wise logical practical rational sound justifiable
NEGATIVE:
damaging= destructive detrimental harmful malignant evil ferocious
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