雅思写作秘笈之2009年1月17号雅思大作文
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下面是我自己写的作文，字数302，错误很多，只是练手之作，看到时候能否改错修改接近250个字
The communication technology and evolution of transport are at an accelerated rate in current society. However, whether transmigrate to other cities or countries where people want has caused spirited controversy. Some individual assert that it make extra wealth by outlanders, from my own perspective I am side with the strength outweigh the weakness.
I find compelling the argument that some persons special including the have graduated students should be encouraged by government to transplant. In the first place, the finance will be stronger. Therefore, with the increasing number of labor and residents who migrated from other city, obviously, the government’s tax of collecting augment evidently, as a result, a vast amount of fund invest in infrastructure. Furthermore, it enriches their experience. Specifically, due to there are different cultures in one country, indeed, a province, mutual understand the divers of each culture will broaden their horizons.
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On the other hand, colorable argument can be made that authority should circumscribe a multitude of outlander to come in. The fundamental reason for this is that these people compete with indigene. It is manifest that with the progressive number of population result in many transmigrated, that less of employment opportunity improve the competition to people impact the stable society. But further analysis would made clear that, as a matter of fact, if the government were offered extra positions of job opportunity, this issue would be ignore. One illustration of this is in term of that authority to give priority to augment added budget on infrastructure and attract more investment would solve this problem.
To conclude, even so competitive of employment opportunity can not be ignored by every one, however, as a consequence, I would illustrate that provided that the government were increased investment of fund on base facilities, I think the pros would outweigh the cons.
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