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2012gre写作模板:GRE作文范文大全(116)

Gre写作是美国所有作文考试中时刻最长而质量要求最高的一类作文考试,而在短期内提高gre写作能力不是一天两天可以完成额,所以我们在备考2011新gre写作时必然要对问题问题深切的剖析,体味以下优异范文的文章结构,以提高新gre写作的整体分数。

First, the argument assumes that depression and fatigue are just as readily diagnosed in

Asia as in North America. However, it is entirely possible that Asians suffering from these

problems do not complain about them or otherwise admit them. For that matter, perhaps Asian

medical doctors view certain symptoms which North Americans would consider signs of

fatigue and depression as signs of some other problem.

Secondly, the argument assumes that the difference in soy consumption is the only possible

explanation for this disparity in the occurrence of fatigue and depression. Yet the argument

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fails to substantiate this assumption. Common sense informs me that any one of a myriad of

other differences---environmental, dietary, and genetic--might explain why North Americans

suffer from these problems to a greater extent than Asians do. Without considering and ruling

out alternative reasons for this disparity, the argument's conclusion that soy is the key to the

disparity is indefensible.

Thirdly, the argument unfairly infers from the fact that soy is known to possess disease

preventing properties that these properties help prevent fatigue and depression specifically.

The argument supplies no evidence to substantiate this assumption. Moreover, whether

fatigue and depression are appropriately classified as diseases in the first place is

questionable.

Finally, even if the properties in soy can be shown to prevent fatigue and depression, the

argument unfairly assumes that eating soy is the only means of ingesting the key substances.

It is entirely possible that these same properties are found in other forms, and therefore that

North Americans need not increase soy consumption to help prevent fatigue and depression. 感谢您阅读《GRE作文范文大全(116) 》一文,查字典出国留学网()编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。Gre写作是美国所有作文考试中时刻最长而质量要求最高的一类作文考试,而在短期内提高gre写作能力不是一天两天可以完成额,所以我们在备考2011新gre写作时必然要对问题问题深切的剖析,体味以下优异范文的文章结构,以提高新gre写作的整体分数。

In sum, the argument is dubious at best. Before I can accept its conclusion, the argument's

proponent must provide better evidence that people in Asia in fact suffer less from fatigue and

depression than North Americans do. To better evaluate the argument I would need to know

what kinds of diseases the properties of soy are known to help prevent, and whether they

relate at all to fatigue and depression. I would also need to know what other foods contain the

same properties as soy--to determine what alternatives, if any, are available for preventing

fatigue and depression.

Argument 51

The following is taken from the editorial section of the local newspaper in Rockingham.

"In order to save a considerable amount of money, Rockingham's century-old town hall should

be torn down and replaced by the larger and more energy-efficient building that some citizens

have proposed. The old town hall is too small to comfortably accommodate the number of

people who are employed by the town. In addition, it is very costly to heat the old hall in winter

and cool it in summer. The new, larger building would be more energy efficient, costing less

per square foot to heat and cool than the old hall. Furthermore, it would be possible to rent out

some of the space in the new building, thereby generating income for the town of

Rockingham."

This editorial condudes that the town of Rockingham would save money by replacing its old

town hall with a larger, more energy-efficient one. To support the argument the editorial's

author cites the need for a larger building to comfortably accommodate employees, and the

fact that the proposed building would cost less per cubic foot to heat and cool than the current

building would. However, the editorial is unconvincing for several reasons.

First of all, even though it would cost less per cubic foot to heat and cool the new building,

because the new building would be larger the total cooling and heating costs might actually be

greater than they are now. Add to this possibility the initial cost of replacing the structure, and

in all likelihood the new building would not save money for the town. Besides, the argument

ignores other, potentially less expensive, means of reducing current heating and cooling

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costs--for example, retrofitting the building with a new climate control system.

Secondly, the editorial relies partly on the fact that the current building cannot comfortably

accommodate all the people who work in it. However, this fact in itself is irrelevant to whether

the town would save money by replacing the building. Besides, the editorial ignores other,

potentially less expensive, solutions to the current comfort problem--for example, adding an

annex to the current structure. 感谢您阅读《GRE作文范文大全(116) 》一文,查字典出国留学网()编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。Gre写作是美国所有作文考试中时刻最长而质量要求最高的一类作文考试,而在短期内提高gre写作能力不是一天两天可以完成额,所以我们在备考2011新gre写作时必然要对问题问题深切的剖析,体味以下优异范文的文章结构,以提高新gre写作的整体分数。

Thirdly, the editorial relies partly on the assertion that the town could generate income by

renting out part of a larger new building. However, the author equivocates here--on the one

hand claiming that a larger building is needed because the old one is too small to

accommodate employees, while on the other hand proposing that the additional space not be

used to solve this problem. The use of conflicting evidence to support the same conclusion

renders the argument wholly unpersuasive.

In conclusion, the editorial is unconvincing as it stands. To strengthen the assertion that a

new building would save the town money, the editorial's author must provide a detailed

analysis comparing the cost of cooling and heating the current hall to the anticipated cost of

cooling and heating the new hall. In this analysis, the author must factor in the initial cost of

replacing the old hall, as well as the additional rental income that the larger hall might generate.

Finally, the author must choose between two competing objectives: creating a more spacious

environment for current employees or creating a larger hall for the purpose of generating rental

income.

Argument 52

Claitown University needs both affordable housing for its students and a way to fund the

building of such housing. The best solution to this problem is to commission a famous architect

known for experimental and futuristic buildings. It is common knowledge that tourists are

willing to pay money to tour some of the architect's buildings, so it can be expected that

tourists will want to visit this new building. The income from the fees charged to tourists will

soon cover the building costs. Furthermore, such a building will attract new students as well as

donations from alumni. And even though such a building will be much larger than our current

need for student housing, part of the building can be used as office space. 感谢您阅读《GRE作文范文大全(116) 》一文,查字典出国留学网()编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。

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