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新gre写作题库:GRE作文范文大全(89)

GRE作文是中国学生比较头痛的,经常准备很多时间最后还是只得到3.5。我之所以得到6分,个人认为我的文风比较淳朴扎实,有科学性,写的思路比较广(正、反、特),字数也比较多(I800+、A700+)。

Without accounting for these and other possible dissimilarities, the committee cannot assume

that what resulted in rising property values in Brookville would bring about the same result in

Deerhaven.

In conclusion, to persuade me that Deerhaven should adopt the proposed restrictions the

committee must supply clear evidence that the implementation of Brookville's restrictions, and

not some other factor, was responsible for the rise in Brookville's property values. The

committee must also provide evidence that other factors affecting home prices in the two areas

are otherwise essentially the same.

Argument 3

The following appeared in a newspaper article about law firms in the city of Megalopolis.

"In Megalopolis, the number of law school graduates who went to work for large, corporate

firms declined by 15% over the last three years, whereas an increasing number of graduates

took jobs at small, general practice firms. Even though large firms usually offer much higher

salaries, law school graduates are choosing to work for the smaller firms most likely because

they experience greater job satisfaction at smaller firms. In a survey of first-year students at a

leading law school, most agreed with the statement that earning a high salary was less

important to them than job satisfaction. This finding suggests that the large, corporate firms of

Megalopolis will need to offer graduates more benefits and incentives and reduce the number

of hours they must work."

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This article concludes that despite the relatively high salaries at Megalopolis' large law firms,

these fro-ns must begin offering more benefits and incentives to new law-school graduates,

while requiring them to work fewer hours, in order to reverse a 3-year 15% decline in the

number of graduates going to work for these firms. To justify this conclusion the article's author

notes that during the last 3 years the number of new law-school graduates going to work for

small firms has risen. The author also cites a survey at one leading law school in which most

first-year students indicated that job satisfaction was more important than salary. I find this

argument logically unconvincing in several respects. 感谢您阅读《GRE作文范文大全(89) 》一文,查字典出国留学网()编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。GRE作文是中国学生比较头痛的,经常准备很多时间最后还是只得到3.5。我之所以得到6分,个人认为我的文风比较淳朴扎实,有科学性,写的思路比较广(正、反、特),字数也比较多(I800+、A700+)。

First of all, the 15% decline that the author cites is not necessarily due to the vocational

preferences of new law-school graduates. It is entirely possible that the number of new

graduates preferring to work for large firms has not declined, but that during the last three

years MegalopoLis' large firms have had fewer and fewer job openings for these graduates.

Since the article fails to account for this alternative explanation for the 15% decline, the

article's author cannot make any sound recommendations to law faa-ns based on that decline.

As for the survey that the article cites, the vocational goals of first-year law students do not

necessarily reflect those of graduating students; after all, a law student's vocational goals can

change over a three-year period. Moreover, the goals of students at one law school do not

necessarily reflect those of the overall pool of graduates that might seek employment with

Megalopolis law firms. In fact, given that the school whose students participated in the survey

was a "leading" school, it is entirely possible that the vast majority of the school's graduates

may choose among offers from many large firms in many cities. If so, this fact would further

undermine the survey's relevance in prescribing any course of action for Megalopolis' law

firms.

Finally, the author falsely equates the proposed tangible incentives with job satisfaction,

which is an intangible reward based on the nature of one's work. Moreover, enhanced job

benefits can be tantamount to an enhanced salary, and shorter working hours amount to a

higher hourly wage. Thus if new law-school graduates seeking jobs in MegalopoLis are less

interested in monetary rewards than in job satisfaction, then the proposed incentives are not

likely to entice these graduates. 感谢您阅读《GRE作文范文大全(89) 》一文,查字典出国留学网()编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。

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