让你真正掌握gre写作精髓(九)
前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破greissue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。
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题目题材：教育
gre argument9题目：
The following appeared in a memorandum from a dean at Omega University.
"Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors(1). Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risen by thirty percent.(2) Potential employers apparently believe the grades at Omega are inflated; this would explain why Omega graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University(3,7). To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should now terminate student evaluation of professors.(4,5,6)"
gre argument9提纲：
The dean provides no evidence about the number or percentage of Omega students who participate in the procedure.
The argument also assumes unfairly that the grade-average increase is the result of the evaluation procedure—rather than some other phenomenon.
The dean's claim that grade inflation explains why Omega graduates are less successful than Alpha graduates in getting jobs is unjustified.
The dean ignores other possible ways by which Omega can increase its job-placement record.
Merely terminating the evaluation system might not suffice to enable Omega’s graduates to secure better jobs.
The dean fails to mention the positive effects of the evaluation system.
The graduates from the two universities may not be comparable.
注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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